Talk:Mall (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
 * and fans → remove
 * occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid → occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.

Background and composition

 * song length → songs length
 * together with → and
 * With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
 * Add the release dates here
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

 * intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
 * frantic → not very encyclopedic
 * Add the music video source at the end of the description.❌
 * I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Festivali i Këngës

 * Fine

Lisbon

 * small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Personnel

 * Fine

Track listing

 * Fine

Release history

 * Fine

Overall

 * You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:13, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)