Talk:Malta/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: --12george1 (talk) 03:53, 2 February 2011 (UTC)


 * After finishing the review, I have to fail this article, you may re-nominate after you revise the article.--12george1 (talk) 03:53, 2 February 2011 (UTC)


 * General
 * Nearly the entire article is unreferenced.
 * Somethings are grossly over-linked, such as "Valletta".


 * Lead
 * None of the kilometers have the conversion to miles
 * I don't think there should be things like "(since [year])", revise it so that there isn't any of that in parenthesis. For example: "It is a member of the United Nations (since 1964)"; revise to something like "It has been member of the United Nations since 1964"


 * Etymology
 * Why is there "𐤈𐤄𐤋𐤀𐤌"?


 * Military
 * There is no conversion to miles for "250,000 km2" at the end of the second paragraph.


 * Geography
 * The word metres should abbreviated, specially 253 metres (830 ft).


 * Climate
 * It is unnecessary to have the suffix at the end of the dates, like February 19th should simply be February 19.
 * "In total 6 months – from June to November – the average sea temperature exceeds 21 °C (70 °F)." - spell out 6.


 * Economy
 * Since you have the American version of the dates, there should be 1 May 2004 or 8 January 2007, rather, May 1, 2004 and January 8, 2007.


 * Banking
 * Date inconsistency is present again: 17 April 1968, 4 May 2005, and 1 January 2008.


 * Transport
 * There is again occurrences of inconsistency with dates.
 * "This will include a day service from 6am to 11pm and a night service from 11pm to 6am." I am assuming this is in the timezone of Malta, but other people may not know that.


 * Reference
 * The following references are "deadlinks": #12, #27, #43, #60, #80, #85, and #106.
 * References #52 and #80 are simply a URL, and should have the title.