Talk:Man Down (Holby City)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Responded to all your comments below. Soaper1234 - talk  22:02, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT.
 * "who he" "with who he"
 * Quotations need sources per WP:REF.
 * "The episodes serves" "The episode serves"
 * Since its a type of camera, uses of Steadicam should be capitalized.
 * Is "benefitied" a typo or a British variant of the word?
 * "had walk" "had walked"
 * All ✅ Soaper1234 - talk  21:01, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * Without the parenthetical names, the plot is at 491 words. Try getting it to 400 per MOS:TVPLOT.
 * "A flashbacks" "A flashback" or "Flashbacks"
 * There appears to be a word missing in between "into hospital".
 * All ✅ Soaper1234 - talk  21:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * Remove the comma after "had been dropped".
 * "would featured" "would be featured"
 * "portrayl" appears to be a typo.
 * "Holby City have" "Holby City has"
 * "rather using the traditional steadicam" "rather than using the traditional Steadicam"
 * All ✅ Soaper1234 - talk  21:49, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Promotion and broadcast

 * "insits" "insist"
 * Promotional material should list reactions to the content not just "[content] aired [date]" per WP:TRAILER.
 * All ✅ Soaper1234 - talk  21:58, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * This section looks good.

References and notes

 * In the notes, change "see [...]" to "As depicted in [...]" per consistency with other GA-articles (similar example).
 * ✅ Soaper1234 - talk  22:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).
 * Done prior to the review. Soaper1234 - talk  22:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)