Talk:Man Down (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 17:17, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * No source in article to support where and when the song was recorded


 * Lead
 * ...the song has so far peaked at... – This wording may not be relevant as time goes on
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!


 * Background, release and composition
 * No issues


 * Critical reception
 * Recommendation: I would put composition into critical reception, OR put the audio sample in the above section
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 * No other issues


 * Chart performance
 * ...charted in other countires... – Fix spelling
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 * Music video
 * ...who worked with Rihanna for most of her music videos. – Give some examples of other videos he worked with Rihanna on, so this information is verifiable
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * ...Rihanna for "cold, calculated execution of murder" in the video... – Add period at end
 * ❌ What is a period in British English? Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * It ends a sentence. Right now, it shows "criticized Rihanna for "cold, calculated execution of murder" in the video, The council disagreed...". There should be a period (.) at the end of "video" because "The council disagreed" is a seperate sentence. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, a full stop. ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!


 * Credits and personnel
 * No issues


 * Charts
 * No issues


 * Radio and release history
 * No issues


 * References
 * Reference 1 – Publisher is MTV Networks
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 * Reference 2 – Publisher is Digital Spy
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 * References 3 & 4 – It should cite source with original publisher and should use "archiveurl=" parameter
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 * Reference 5 – "Hachette Filipacchi (UK).Ltd." not needed as publisher
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 * Reference 6 – iTunes Store and Apple Inc. should be italicized
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 * References 18, 19, & 20 – Include "work=" and "publisher=" parameters
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 * Reference 21 – Publisher needs to be wiki-linked
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 * Reference 31 – "Digital Spy" is not a magazine or other written work, so it should not be italicized
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 * Reference 37 – When I click on this reference it says "Page Not Found"
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 * References 42 & 43 – "publisher=" and "language=" parameters are needed
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 * Reference 44 – "publisher=" parameter is needed
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 * Are you sure no other references are missing parameters? Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!
 * Based on my review, I believe there aren't any other issues. If you do see issues though, please tell me. I am human, and I do make mistakes occasionally. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * okay, i just added some work, publisher and accessdates to a few. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!

Overall review
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold at this time. There are a few minor issues above which are affecting the prose quality of the article. Other than that, the only major problem I see is the formatting of sources in the "References" section. I will give you the general seven days to address these issues and/or debate the issues you believe do not affect GA status until a consensus on all issues is reached. When you have addressed an issue, please use the  template to indicate which issues you have fixed. If you need help or have any questions, please feel free to ask. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay thanks, I will do this later today. It's 2:50am! Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon! 01:49, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Have done most things, just two questions above. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  14:46, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything is done now. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  17:29, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. I would recommend using the  template to help organize the international chart positions. For a resource, see: Template:Singlechart. Congratulations and keep up the good work! - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 17:46, 5 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I will do yours tomorrow, I promise! Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  18:09, 5 August 2011 (UTC)