Talk:Man and Boy (novel)

82.127.241.239 (talk) 22:46, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

The level of grammar in this article is shocking. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.151.33.249 (talk) 15:52, 2 October 2008 (UTC)

I agree. So I've tidied it up a bit. However the second part doesn't IMHO belong here. 82.127.241.239 (talk) 22:46, 24 October 2008 (UTC)