Talk:Man of the Hole/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 15:12, 28 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll do the review. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 15:12, 28 September 2022 (UTC)

Pretty good so far. Here's what I'd suggest:


 * The lead seems a little long and overly detailed given the article's length.
 * It says he survived an attack by a single rancher in the lead, but the body says "gunmen" plural, with no mention of them being ranchers.
 * Could you name some specific indigenous rights groups that support the demand of him being buried where he lived?
 * No images. I know public domain images are scarce for topics like this, but if you can, finding something at least vaguely related to the topic is generally better than nothing.

That's all I found, and if you would rather leave one of the bullets alone, just tell me. Otherwise, it meets all six criteria. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 15:23, 28 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review and the good suggestions, . Responding to your points:
 * I've trimmed the lead down
 * It should be ranchers/gunmen plural according to the sources, fixed
 * The source only says "indigenous rights groups", which makes me think it could well just be referring back to dos Santos. I don't think this sentence really adds anything so I've just removed it.
 * We obviously won't get a free image, but I've tried with one of the few grainy-cam photos of him under fair use. I also added a map.
 * Do let me know if there's anything else! –&#8239;Joe (talk) 10:15, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Beautiful work. It looks perfect. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 10:55, 3 October 2022 (UTC)