Talk:Manam (film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 08:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 08:39, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Plot

 * Wikilink "Salsa dance" and write a capital S for Salsa.
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Production

 * "Reliance Entertainment presented the film." — by presented, do you mean "co-produced and distributed"?
 * Yes. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "Neetu Chandra, who worked with Kumar on Yavarum Nalam (2009), made a cameo appearance in the film." — Is this mentioned in ref no 19?
 * Yes. it is, but the film's name was mentioned as 13B however. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "Due to Nageswara Rao's death, a song's tune was replaced with another and a few lines of the song Nenu Puttanu from the film Prem Nagar (1971)." — do you mean "another" as in "another tune"?
 * Yes. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Wikilink "goatee".
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * "left Switzerland on 18 June 2013" — did she leave the country (or) is it "left for Switzerland"?
 * The latter. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Present the full form of BITS Pilani for more clarity.
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Wikilink "backwaters".
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Release

 * Wikilink all districts, cities and countries (except those that already have a wikilink).
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:13, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Can you rephrase "platinum disc function". (better, you can add a footnote about what it is).
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:15, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Write the full form of "TRP rating" and, if possible, wikilink it.
 * TRP is linked but is it necessary to write its full form? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:15, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * If it is wikilinked, then no problem. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me '' 16:17, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Reception

 * In the critical reception section, remove the italics from Cinemalead, Sify, Oneindia Entertainment and IndiaGlitz as they are websites, not newspapers.
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:18, 24 February 2015 (UTC)


 * In the overseas portion of the BO section, some places it is spelled "US", in other places, it is "United States". Rewrite it as "the United States".
 * ✅ Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:21, 24 February 2015 (UTC)