Talk:Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Try dividing the lead into two paragraphs.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Mention something from #Development.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Storylines

 * Remove the comma after "pregnant".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "Emma explains to best friend Emma" - who is the first Emma?
 * Spelling mistake – fixed. – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "to best friend" "to her best friend"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "The trust ask" "The trust asks"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "while on her maternity leave" "while on maternity leave"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Development

 * "well developed" "well-developed"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "escape for Mandy".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "asked her" "asked about her"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Remove the comma after "comments".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "everyday" "every day"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Digital Spy.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)