Talk:Manhattan Municipal Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:13, 12 June 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * Is there a way to update the comparative cost statistic from 2018 to 2020? Or 2019, since the 2020 formula maybe hasn't been finalized yet? I don't know how such things work, I think there's a template somewhere but not 100% sure.
 * This uses inflation-year with index set to US-GDP. The most updated statistics are from 2018. epicgenius (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Prose and lead say NYCL in 1965, but the infobox says 1966
 * It was 1966. epicgenius (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "Of this, about 600,000 square feet (56,000 m2) was used for offices" - The use of was implies that it is no longer used for office space, is that accurate?
 * It is still accurate. epicgenius (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
 * You use "Mayor Franklin Edson" and "mayor Seth Lowe", be consistent with capitalization of the title Mayor
 * In the infobox, construction is listed as 1907-1914, but the prose seems to indicate that construction began in 1909, with the design not even having been selected by 1907
 * Oops, fixed. epicgenius (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "and green mercury-vapor bulbs were also installed in the north lobby" - Piped Link mercury vapor bulb
 * "and green mercury-vapor bulbs were also installed in the north lobby" - Piped Link mercury vapor bulb

2.
 * NYCL no. and exact listing dates need cited in the infobox, only the years are given in the prose
 * Ref 131 is dead, although the error code indicates it may be just a temporary issue.
 * I think it's temporary too. epicgenius (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Accessdate for ref 6, as well as the other Columbia PDFs, an accessdate at least provides an indication of when the ref was working in the past, in case the URL goes dead in the future.
 * Accessdate for ref 6, as well as the other Columbia PDFs, an accessdate at least provides an indication of when the ref was working in the past, in case the URL goes dead in the future.

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This one's in good shape as is, just needs a little tightening up. Hog Farm (talk) 20:50, 14 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I have done all of these. epicgenius (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)