Talk:Mantled guereza/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 19:56, 1 December 2012 (UTC)


 * I will undertake this review. Here are a few early comments before I go through the article in detail: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:56, 1 December 2012 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be much longer. It should be a summary of the article.  See Wikipedia's Manual of Style for more information.
 * Every paragraph should be referenced. There are a few that aren't. See this page for information on referencing.
 * Read through the article carefully. Are there words that members of the public reading the article might not know? See if you can find a suitable wikilink for them.

Article now on hold
Looking at the history of this article I see that no substantial alterations have been made in it for many months prior to it being nominated for GA. Since I made the above comments a week ago no action has been taken on any of them. I have put the review on hold and will make a fuller review if I see evidence of anyone trying to raise the article to GA standard. Otherwise, I will fail it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:22, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

GA Fail
I am failing this article on the grounds that it is not well-enough referenced and no attempt has been made to improve it along the lines outlined above. Please nominate it again when these matters have been resolved. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:07, 15 December 2012 (UTC)