Talk:Manuel Komnenos (kouropalates)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 20:36, 2 November 2020 (UTC)


 * "File:Seal of Manuel Komnenos, kouropalates.jpg" needs a PD tag for the coin itself.
 * Done
 * Could we have an in line translation or explanation of kouropalates? Likewise sebastos and typikon.
 * Hmmm, yes for the typikon, but I am hesitant for the others; it should suffice to place them in context as court ranks. Explaining what they mean or their exact place in the hierarchy would IMO derail the article.
 * Hi Constantine, what you have done for sebastos is more or less what I wanted/expected, and I can see the arguement that what you currently have for kouropalates is as much as a general reader would reasonably want, without Wikilinking, so fine.


 * A non-GAN point: foreign words should use lang templates, not just italics.
 * Done
 * "Mt. Azalas" - in full?
 * Done
 * Could Garland have a Publisher location.
 * Done

That's all, bar a bit of copy editing which you will want to check. As usual, let me know if I have caused any problems. Nice article. Gog the Mild (talk) 12:19, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi Gog the Mild, thanks for taking this on (and for the prose tweaks). Your points have been addressed. Constantine  ✍  18:09, 4 November 2020 (UTC)