Talk:Manufacturers Trust Company Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:57, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:57, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Lead is 4 paragraph but it goes with MOS:LEADLENGTH.
 * Remove the comma after "the original proposal".
 * Done.
 * "The panes at the second floor" "The panes on the second floor"
 * Done.
 * Remove the comma after "covered by moldings".
 * Done.
 * "as it were floating" "as it was floating" (consistency)
 * Fixed.
 * "A pair of escalators leads" "A pair of escalators lead"
 * Fixed. A pair is typically singular but I just changed it to "two escalators". Epicgenius (talk) 19:56, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
 * In #First_floor, remove the comma after "Fifth Avenue facade".
 * Done.
 * "into a dining room, and had a ebony" "into a dining room and had an ebony"
 * Done.
 * "second busiest" "second-busiest"
 * Done.
 * Remove the comma after "Manhattan's Financial District".
 * Done.
 * "successor firm Walker & Poor were" "successor firm Walker & Poor was" (company)
 * Done.
 * "parapet at the second floor" "parapet on the second floor"
 * Done.
 * "The vault in particular proved" "The vault, in particular, proved"
 * Done.
 * Remove the comma after "traditional bank vaults".
 * Done.
 * and "symbol of" and a "symbol of"
 * Done.
 * WP:NYPOST - New York Post is unreliable.
 * Replaced.
 * Mark sources from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Done.

Progress

 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all of the issues above. Epicgenius (talk) 19:56, 1 June 2021 (UTC)