Talk:María Pacheco/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 09:31, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sawyer777 (talk · contribs) 18:54, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

sounds like a super interesting topic! i'll try to get through this by the end of the week. ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  18:54, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

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... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  19:24, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * since her father is mentioned in the lead, it'd be good to name & link him. ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  19:24, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
 * on the same note, Following the outbreak of the Revolt of the Comuneros, could use a date for clarity ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  23:25, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Added name and date. --Grnrchst (talk) 08:09, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * the archive.org link for Fink De Backer 2004 isn't working for me; it says "item cannot be found" ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  21:49, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Fixed. --Grnrchst (talk) 08:10, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * source check: all of the sources look excellent in terms of quality/reliability; published by academic publishers, etc. i'd love to see the sources listed in the further reading section used, but i won't ask you to learn Spanish for this project haha. i found Fink De Backer on google books, and spot-checked both it and Fleming 2018 - everything came up good! ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  05:42, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I'm actually fluent in Spanish. The reason I didn't use the books is because I don't have easy access to paginated copies; I have access to some as ebooks, but they lack page numbers; others I can only find in libraries hundreds of kilometres away. I could add info from the RAH source, but it would mostly be trivial additions, most of it is already in here. --Grnrchst (talk) 08:16, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ah, that makes sense. thanks for clarifying! ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  19:09, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * in terms of copyvio, no issues found.
 * i quite like the prose style, it's very engaging.
 * MOS is all good.
 * no issues with broadness or focus; all the major aspects of what i'd expect from a biography are there, and it doesn't go into too much obscure detail.
 * the article is neutral enough, discussing both the contemporary negative views of Pacheco and more modern reinterpretations of her legacy.
 * only just noticed this, because i hadn't looked too much at the infobox - the infobox gives her death location as Porto, and her resting place as Porto Cathedral, but this isn't mentioned in the body. that'd be a good thing to get sorted out. ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  19:26, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Her burial in Porto Cathedral was actually mentioned by the RAH source, so I've added that in there. --Grnrchst (talk) 11:44, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
 * where possible, i'd like to see dates & artists' names in the image captions, but that's more of an informal suggestion on my part than anything with the GA criteria. no issues with the images generally. ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  19:40, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Done. --Grnrchst (talk) 12:01, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
 * looking good :) ... sawyer  * he/they *  talk  18:26, 6 June 2024 (UTC)