Talk:Marbled electric ray/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 15:42, 13 May 2011 (UTC)

Ok, let's go. Casliber (talk · contribs) 15:42, 13 May 2011 (UTC)


 *  found in the coastal waters of the western Atlantic Ocean from the North Sea to South Africa - sounds like it refers to the family and not the ray as written. Maybe add "that is" in between two clauses for flow.
 * Added.
 * Aargh - trying to read through it, actually I think that made it worse - I think scans best without any comma at all and original wording. Anyway, all looks good.


 *  The paired electric organs of the marbled electric ray are capable of producing 70–80 volts of electricity. - I'd move this sentence to adjoin the other material on electricity in the lead. It looks odd being mentioned in two different bits
 * Moved.


 * In the Distribution and habitat section, when you say "northern UK" I presume it means "Scotland" (?) - I think if it is Scotland then saying so might be more accessible for readers.
 * Changed.


 * I'd link "physiological"
 * Done.


 * I'd mention in the lead that it uses electricity for hunting
 * The lead does mention it (?)
 * ack. sorry, my bad, must have missed it first read through. Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:04, 14 May 2011 (UTC)

Otherwise looking pretty good. Casliber (talk · contribs) 23:08, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 01:51, 14 May 2011 (UTC)

1. Well written?:
 * Prose quality:
 * Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
 * References to sources:
 * Citations to reliable sources, where required:
 * No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:
 * Major aspects:
 * Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
 * Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?
 * No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
 * Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:20, 14 May 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing. -- Yzx (talk) 02:26, 14 May 2011 (UTC)