Talk:Marc Panepinto

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- EDIT: Panepinto pleaded guilty to a misdemeanor public corruption charge in federal court. (violation of the Hatch Act) related to his time as a New York state senator in 2016. - CURRENT: Following Panepinto's announcement that he would not seek re-election, the Erie County District Attorney's Office opened an investigation into claims of an underage drinking party at Panepinto's home.[8] - EDIT: The investigation came up empty. - CURRENT: In December 2020, Panepinto's law license was suspended for one year.[11] - EDIT: He was reinstated to the practice of law in January 2022; he is currently a partner at Dolce Panepinto law firm. Source: https://finance.yahoo.com/video/da-investigating-senator-marc-panepinto-113347325.html?guccounter=1&guce_referrer=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuZ29vZ2xlLmNvbS8&guce_referrer_sig=AQAAAMCc0rL_zEU1dlbyd6ZoJ0Jq4iFW7U6ChK8GpTdpmY84eFAoV7QobkMR9NBtFdj0M-0r-GR_voRkE0v-p815jVQiEFndSCHLSW1peh3omBEwgOdlgVI7wtJpISDJ-VJxoDFsyiKa08I3uC5H4WgJyIa0yxerNOnMGwsKw1m7-k5A Source: https://law.justia.com/cases/new-york/appellate-division-fourth-department/2022/1168-ka-19-00992-1.html
 * Specific text to be added or removed: - CURRENT: On June 28, 2018, Panepinto pleaded guilty to federal corruption charges arising out of an attempted cover-up of unwanted sexual advances he made to a member of his Senate staff in January 2016.
 * Reason for the change: Factual inaccuracies
 * References supporting change: Source: https://www.wgrz.com/article/news/crime/former-state-senator-marc-panepinto-pleads-guilty-to-public-corruption/71-568564565#:~:text=BUFFALO%2C%20NY%2D%2D%20Former%20New,and%2For%20a%20%24100%2C000%20fine.

2603:7080:1A00:2C4C:107F:3A2C:407:A93B (talk) 18:08, 27 July 2023 (UTC)

Reply 27-JUL-2023

 * Your edit request could not be reviewed because it is unclear which references are connected to which claim statements in the text of your proposal. When proposing edit requests it is important to highlight in the text, through the use of ref tags, which specific sources are doing the referencing for each claim. The point of these inline ref tags is to allow the reviewer and readers to check that the material is sourced; that point will be lost if the ref tags are not clearly placed. Note the examples below:

 The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.

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 The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]

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^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1. ^ Harinath, Paramjit. (2019) "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46. ^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2. 


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 * Specific text to be added or removed:
 * CURRENT: On June 28, 2018, Panepinto pleaded guilty to federal corruption charges arising out of an attempted cover-up of unwanted sexual advances he made to a member of his Senate staff in January 2016.
 * EDIT TO: Panepinto pleaded guilty to a misdemeanor public corruption charge in federal court. (violation of the Hatch Act) related to his time as a New York state senator in 2016. (Source: https://www.wgrz.com/article/news/crime/former-state-senator-marc-panepinto-pleads-guilty-to-public-corruption/71-568564565#:~:text=BUFFALO%2C%20NY%2D%2D%20Former%20New,and%2For%20a%20%24100%2C000%20fine.)
 * CURRENT: In December 2020, Panepinto's law license was suspended for one year.[11]
 * EDIT: He was reinstated to the practice of law in January 2022; he is currently a partner at Dolce Panepinto law firm.
 * SOURCE: https://law.justia.com/cases/new-york/appellate-division-fourth-department/2022/1168-ka-19-00992-1.html
 * Reason for the change: Factual inaccuracies and updates needed for clarification.
 * References supporting change: Listed above.
 * 24.213.233.118 (talk) 14:35, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 24.213.233.118 (talk) 14:35, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Reply 8-AUG-2023
Regards, Spintendo  14:58, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) ✅ The information about the reinstatement of the subject's law license was implemented.
 * 2) ❌ The information concerning the subject's guilty plea was not changed, because adequate reasons for its change were not provided. The given reason, "Factual inaccuracies and updates needed for clarification" does not state with specificity what information in the existing claim is inaccurate. To substitute the existing language, please give the reasons why the current information needs to be changed.


 * Currently it says he pled guilty to federal corruption charges when it was a misdemeanor public corruption charge and a violation of the Hatch Act. 24.213.233.118 (talk) 19:11, 8 August 2023 (UTC)