Talk:March on Rome (88 BC)

Minor factual stuff
Some minor factual issues, mostly on emphasis rather than accuracy (I broadly believe the article to be accurate), below. I think in general the article is a good addition; we needed a modern one on this topic and I'm very happy to see it! Ifly6 (talk) 15:11, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

Pompeius deposed
I think the disagreement as to whether Pompeius Rufus was deposed should be made more equivocal and moved from notes into the body. Ifly6 (talk) 14:52, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
 * The sources were mostly of the view that he was deposed. T8612  (talk) 08:22, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Prosecuting Sulla
Re His goal was perhaps to convict Sulla and therefore strip him of his command, but the move was illegal as a magistrate holding imperium had immunity. Would not any prosecution have disposed of the issue by invoking the precedent from Caepio to abrogate Sulla's imperium? Ifly6 (talk) 15:11, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Sources didn't say. Someone wrote that Cinna just wanted to boost his popularity, but I couldn't find who. T8612  (talk) 08:22, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Copyediting
I also hope that the copyediting I've been doing isn't bothersome. In general they're mostly MOS stuff (like placement of quotes and full stops). I know English and French styles differ on a lot of these. (Though I would definitely prefer some French styles such as spaces before semicolons and currency marks after the numbers.) Ifly6 (talk) 15:03, 17 April 2024 (UTC)