Talk:Marco Camisani Calzolari

July 2024
Hi, thanks for the feedback on this page. I'd love to get the page up to scratch so let me know how best we can go about this.

Re: your points. 1) There is a paid editing disclosure on my page, but which I haven't updated with specific client names recently, so this is up to date now following your remark. 2) The page has previously been flagged for like resumé (see KJ cheetham)  and edits were made to improve encylopaedic tones with KJ Cheetam removing the tag after improvements, so I'm suprirised it comes across as advertising. However, I'm always eager to improve neutrality so do let me know if any specific aspects are problematic. In the meantime I will myself go through to improve neutrality. 3) this page has been active since 2022 with multiple edits, so I wouldn't say it's a new editor per say. Findally, noting notability. Camisani recently received an international award (see my most recent edit) for §2 of academic criteria. He has also been the subject of a UCL case study which outlines his suitability for criteria §1, He has also worked at prestigious institutions, held various chair positions which have been further recognised in governmental appointments which meet §5 and §7 of academic notability criteria. Thanks for any further feedback and I'd love to make this page as great and encyclopaedic as possible!

Inhertbows Inhertbows (talk) 14:11, 1 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi @Inhertbows, thank you for disclosing status. Per WP:PAY you should not publish such articles directly but put them through WP:AFC. This article is very promotional and therefore needs to be more substantially edited.  I would advise you to move the article to an AfC draft and take it from there. thanks. Aszx5000 (talk) 08:45, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
 * I have also posted a note on the Conflict of interest/Noticeboard for discussion. thanks. Aszx5000 (talk) 09:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi, thanks for the response. I think there’s a slight miscommunication on my half -the page was published by a different user, I was contracted to essentially keep the page up to date and make changes etc. I will give the page an overview to remove advertising tone etc in next few days. Inhertbows (talk) 10:10, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @Inhertbows I would not directly edit the page (per WP:PAID), but leave it to others. 11:06, 8 July 2024 (UTC) Aszx5000 (talk) 11:06, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi, agreed I’ll leave the page to other editors. Would you mind removing the UPE tags and so forth but leaving the promotional flag to encourage other editors to improve it. Thanks Inhertbows (talk) 11:29, 8 July 2024 (UTC)