Talk:Marcus Calpurnius Bibulus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:07, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  07:07, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
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 * 2.c   ✅
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 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * After this Bibulus withdrew from public politics for the rest of his term. suggest:
 * After this humiliation Bibulus withdrew from public politics for the rest of his term.
 * In 49 civil war broke out between Caesar and Pompey and Bibulus fought against Caesar. suggest:
 * In 49, after civil war broke out between Caesar and Pompey, Bibulus aligned himself with Pompey.
 * The boni were against anyone who attempted to use these legislative assemblies to reform the state; this was a major policy of populist politician Julius Caesar. suggest:
 * The boni were against anyone who attempted to use these legislative assemblies to reform the state; which was a major policy of the populist Julius Caesar.
 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  08:23, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, that was efficiently swift. Good suggestions. All implemented. Gog the Mild (talk) 09:35, 22 July 2018 (UTC)