Talk:Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley

Your article is good, although there are a few issues in sentence structure that are easily fixable. The ones that I see are the following "Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley (1891-1988) was an American cytologist and geneticist in plant breeding". Switch the word "in" to "who specialized in plant breeding". Similarly "Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley was born in Michigan on 1891" the word on should be the word in. "then continued to work on her doctoral degree in University of California Berkeley" the word in should be the word at. "She began her career as a research associate in University of California in Berkeley, California" "in" should be "at" and it can just be "research associate at the University of California Berkeley". You have a great bibliography and have done a great job here, keep it up.WikiEditor2562 (talk) 04:10, 16 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your review, I find it very helpful. I figured I'd type it down in Words doc first where I have a grammar-check software before pasting it to my sandbox. Please let me know if there's anything else I can improve on. I appreciate it. Ncsdr (talk) 08:22, 23 November 2020 (UTC)