Talk:Margaret Thatcher/GA1

GA Review
Very sorry. Due to sudden overload of work at work, which has to be completed before the end of the week, I will be unable to carry out this review. I have removed my name from it at GA and wish you all the very best in the future.-- Myosotis Scorpioides  11:42, 25 November 2008 (UTC) :''This review is transcluded from Talk:Margaret Thatcher/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''


 * I will be reviewing this article over the next few days. If you have any comments to make about this article, please leave them here.-- Myosotis Scorpioides  10:55, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

An automated peer review gives the following suggestions for this article: I will see what I can do to help, though! And, just checking, as the subject of this article is British, do you want me to change any American words I spot to the English way of spelling them?


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 * Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article.


 * Quick points as I come across them:

1. "graduating with a Second Class Bachelor of Arts degree." What type of Second Class degree did she achieve? A 2.1 or a 2.2? And what was the degree title - Chemistry?
 * I'm not sure whether it was a 2.1 or 2.2, as I cannot find any mention of either in some of my sources. It was indeed a degree in chemistry. Happyme22 (talk) 18:28, 28 November 2008 (UTC)
 * The title is "Bachelor of Arts". At that time, Oxford second class degrees would not have been divided into upper and lower second. EdwardLockhart (talk) 09:43, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

2. "In 1950 she took the degree of Master of Arts." Master of Arts is not a degree, it is a form of advanced degree. She would have achieved an MA in a particular subject. Was it chemistry/science?
 * The sources I have available say that she started a law degree in 1950, but I can't confirm when it was completed or if it was an MA. Road Wizard (talk) 16:57, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
 * An MA is conferred on Oxford BA graduates 21 terms after matriculation without further study on payment of a nominal fee unless disqualified, e.g. by reason of divorce. EdwardLockhart (talk) 09:43, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

3. "Thatcher began to look for a safe Conservative seat" - when? Do you know a year? Or even a general time period, as in the "mid 1950s"
 * I believe it is there already. Happyme22 (talk) 18:28, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

4. "On 15 November 1985, Thatcher and FitzGerald signed the Hillsborough Anglo-Irish Agreement; the first time a British government gave the Republic of Ireland an advisory role in the governance of Northern Ireland. The agreement was greeted with fury by Northern Irish unionists." The last sentence def needs a ref!
 * I'm going to remove it for the time being because there are too many reactions to the treay which amount to more than just this one viewpoint. Happyme22 (talk) 18:28, 28 November 2008 (UTC)

5. "Referring to her role in the struggle against ozone depletion, Carl Sagan opined that she demonstrated the importance in the modern world of leaders having an understanding of science." Ref needed
 * I can't find a cite for that. Agreed -- it should go. Happyme22 (talk) 06:38, 29 November 2008 (UTC)