Talk:Maria Dunn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 04:33, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:33, 21 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Ref 2 is dead.
 * Deleted, it was in intro so not needed.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Any college sports info from the NAIA?
 * Not that I can find, looked pretty hard.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Dunn trained for the 2012 Summer Olympics with Roy Wood in the city of Wigan. She stayed with his family while practicing freestyle wrestling." Merge sentences.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Some pronouns should replace "Dunn" to avoid using the same word to start consecutive sentences.
 * Dunn  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Dunn won silver at the 2002 Oceania Championships [16] and won gold at the 2007,[17] 2008,[18]and 2010 Oceania Championships.[19]" Move Ref 16 to the comma and space needed after Ref 18.
 * added space, also added a comma, seems to make sense where I put it.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "She lost to New Zealand's Tayla Ford in the championship match." In which year?
 * Done (combined sentences)  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Newspapers.com refs should have free access templates or something similar.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  05:10, 21 June 2018 (UTC)