Talk:Maria Grace Saffery

Peer Review
I think you did a really good job creating this page. You separated the information in a very organized way. The only thing I could suggest is to add maybe a sentence more to the introduction. This allows for the readers to get a glimpse or summary of who Maria Grace Saffery is before reading the whole page. Tingflorance (talk) 16:39, 13 November 2014 (UTC)


 * Well done University of Maryland and student Victuallers (talk) 17:33, 13 November 2014 (UTC)

Comments
Nice job, the article flows more chronologically! You may want to review the comments about the intro or lede here and you're missing some citations.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 19:41, 14 November 2014 (UTC)