Talk:Maria Kanellis/GA1

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 * Why was she raised alongside her sister and brother? Does that just tell me she had a sister and brother, or that her sister and brother raised her?
 * Done. Just that she has them. I reworded it but had to use the present tense, so I moved it into the personal life section. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It said she started appearance at OVW under Paul Heyman. Can you clarify what that means?
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * All dates should be linked.
 * Not done. That isn't mandatory anymore and linking dates that weren't full (month, day, and year) was optional. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * She was in the bottom three - I think that should be re-worded. I've never heard the last three competitors called the "bottom three"
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Can you explain the trial against Eric Bischoff, briefly?
 * Done. Is that adequate, or do you think it needs more? Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Maria's quote from the trial can be put into the quote template?
 * Not done. See MOS:QUOTE. It is only mandatory if the quote is four lines or longer. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Can all five girls that had previously been in the ring. be reworded to mention the names of all five girls.
 * Done. They are mentioned in the sentence before. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "first match at WrestleMania" sounds like her first match was at WrestleMania -- it can/should be reworded slightly.
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Reference 1 is invalid.
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * For reference 2, "The Miami Herald" should be wiki-linked.
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Playboy should be wiki-linked as the publisher for reference 30.
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * For reference 31, the publisher should be "World Wrestling Entertainment" and not "WWE"
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * For reference 33, WWE Magazine can be wiki-linked.
 * Done. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)

I've also made some minor fixes, so leave me a message when you are done so I can look over the article one more time. -- iMa tth ew  T.C. 13:09, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Cool. I just got back from a road trip, but I'll get to these later tonight. Nikki  311  18:23, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * No problem! -- iMa tth ew  T.C. 18:42, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Sorry! I guess I was more tired than I originally thought! Everything is done or commented on. Nikki  311  15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)

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Cheers, -- iMa tth ew  T.C. 00:45, 7 July 2008 (UTC)