Talk:Mariano Moreno/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Scampioen (talk) 20:23, 25 April 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass
 * Pass or Fail: Pass


 * Done I have clarified the meanings of some things that may be obscure to non-argentine readers. In others, such as military conflicts, military units, books, etc; the information provided should be enough. That Britain invaded Buenos Aires and Montevideo, or that "The Social Contract" is a book, is enough information, as this is the biography of a specific man, and the article must stay focused in it; further details such as why was there such military conflict or what did the book talk about, should be check at the respective articles. I have also checked the uses of "he", and fied those that may be confusing. As for the header, it's an accepted use that the lead, which is a summary of the article, does not need references for things that are detailed and referenced later. The only references a lead may need would be in quotes, statistics, when BLP may be involved, or other such specific caases Cambalachero (talk) 21:22, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok, I will re-read the article and see if it passes. Scampioen (talk) 16:10, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Changes are satisfactory to me, i'll pass the article as good. Nice work Scampioen (talk) 16:57, 28 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Thank you Cambalachero (talk) 17:27, 28 April 2011 (UTC)