Talk:Mariano Rumor

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 20 March 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jasolon. Peer reviewers: Jasolon.

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Critique 2019-02-09
A. It seems most of the Biographical information is cited as coming from source 1; however, this is rather unclear due to the manner in which it is cited, and the source itself seems rather vague. The second source also seems to be rather vaguely noted, with no way to actually reach it. B. Some of the details seem to go a bit too far, but they are all relevant to Rumor's tenures as Prime Minister. It feels like they could be mentioned in a much more succinct manner, rather then expanding on each. C. The article seems to be neutral, as it is mostly a list of facts without analysis or notation. D. The two sources listed are, as mentioned; rather vague. While 'Growth to Limits' seems to be a legitimate academic book or journal, the second source from "ANSA" is almost totally vague outside its title, and seems to be from a newspaper or website article. E. There doesn't seem to be any overwhelming bias or over-representation of anything; the article is, as mentioned, essentially just a list of facts. F. No citations are linked, and it seems that the largest paragraph (paragraph 1 under the biography) is either mostly uncited or badly cited using the 'Growth to Limits' article. G. Information on how Rumor came to be a powerful figure in DC, to be Prime Minister, as well as Minister of Foreign Affairs and the Interior would be relevant to this article. Furthermore, information providing greater context to his Premierships would be relevant, and any information about his personal life and possible non-governmental pursuits (eg education) would be relevant as well. Just adding sources and correcting unclear citations already existing would be improvements. Jasolon (talk) 05:49, 10 February 2019 (UTC)