Talk:Marie Louise Burgess-Ware

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Both sections on Burgess-Ware’s writing were really good and packed with information. Definitely neutral and I did not see any grammar or structure mistakes. For Ave Maria however, maybe you could add at the conclusion of the section the literary effect of the story, similar to how the Octroon had. You could state if the book was popular, if it was inspired by her life, and what themes of the time scholars said it has shown, etc. I think this would make the Wiki. page more informative! Great job! Angelina.deltoro (talk) 15:10, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Both sections on Burgess-Ware’s writing were really good and packed with information. Definitely neutral and I did not see any grammar or structure mistakes. For Ave Maria however, maybe you could add at the conclusion of the section the literary effect of the story, similar to how the Octroon had. You could state if the book was popular, if it was inspired by her life, and what themes of the time scholars said it has shown, etc. I think this would make the Wiki. page more informative! Great job! Angelina.deltoro (talk) 20:35, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 August 2020 and 8 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kimannfran, Sarahpanico. Peer reviewers: Natsanabria, Angelina.deltoro, Madelynnmarshall.

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