Talk:Marie Orensanz

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 27 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Vgnegrete.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:34, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
In the first paragraph about your artist I would say to change the headline to something else like "Artistry" or "Early Works". You could also included a brief summary of Marie herself before this paragraph just so we could get to know her more as a person such as where she grew up, if she went straight to becoming an artist or she went to school? I like the other topics that you are talking about. What I found interesting and I want to know more about is when you talk about her conceptual art. One thing you could add to your biography of her is to add images that correspond with what you are talking about like an image of the use of symbols in the Conceptual Art paragraph. So far it seems like you have a general outline and information of Orensanz now it would just be on expanding more on the broad topics you have chosen to talk about. You could add more detail and elaborate more on specific pieces or techniques. I would also say to add a summary paragraph of just her early life or what made her become an artist, this paragraph does not have to be elaborate but something small compared to the others. Great start, can't wait to read the finish product! Vgnegrete (talk) 18:14, 19 February 2019 (UTC)Vgnegrete (talk) Vgnegrete (talk) 18:15, 19 February 2019 (UTC)Vanessa NegreteVgnegrete (talk) 18:15, 19 February 2019 (UTC)