Talk:Mario Balotelli/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 16:49, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: five found and tagged. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:55, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The lead does not fully summarise the article, please see WP:LEAD for guidelines.
 * A number of stray sentences throughout which need consolidating into parargraphs.
 * He scored a tie-breaking penalty kick into the Primavera league final 1–0 win over Sampdoria, prompting high praise from people including Inter chairman Massimo Moratti. ungrammatical
 * Before the start of the 2008–09 season, Balotelli signed a three-year contract with Inter, the maximum length he could sign ungrammatical
 * Please go over the article copy-editing again, read it out aloud to improve the prose and flow
 * There is a lot or repetitive overlinking, please see WP:OVERLINK
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * five dead links as noted above
 * Re-tagged as requested. This time CHECKLINKS found two archived versions. You can use this tool yourself.
 * Otherwise references appear OK.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Good coverage.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * NPOV
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Some vandalism by IPs, but this appears to be under control.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * tagged and captioned
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:15, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, all in order, please remember to get articles copy-edited before nominating at WP:GAN. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 13:06, 1 April 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, all in order, please remember to get articles copy-edited before nominating at WP:GAN. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 13:06, 1 April 2011 (UTC)