Talk:Marion Dougherty

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ruth Maffett. Peer reviewers: Emlillyjo.

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Peer Review Suggestions
Really well written article! I just have a few suggestions to improve the quality. First, I think expanding on the introductory paragraph would be beneficial, as she was a very important woman in film. Her introduction should reflect her legacy, and briefly overview her importance and accomplishments. Also, most of the film titles listed were italicized, but the couple that weren't I fixed for you. And lastly, remember to keep a subjective tone from your writing. For example, the sentence "Unfortunately this dream of recognizing the woman considered to be the "grand matriarch" of casting was never accomplished before her death in 2011", while completely accurate, and normally would be well written and complimentary to an article, the wording hints towards your own feelings on the matter. But other than those suggestions, very well done! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emlillyjo (talk • contribs) 02:14, 9 October 2015 (UTC)