Talk:Marion Stegeman Hodgson

Getting near the end
You've done some excellent work on your article, but nothing since July 12. First off, your refs are out of order and a bit redundant. Do you want to footnote full references or have a list in your works cited? You do not need both. Footnote indications need to be right up against the text; no space before a footnote. A lead section should summarize what appears in the article; you should save footnotes for the body of the article. All words in section headers should not be capitalized. The information in your article is pretty good (though maybe more is needed about her professional life), and you use internal links well. Why is the block quotation italicized? You're nearly there. —Grlucas (talk) 13:10, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

Organizing
Looking back over the article, I think we could reorganize the sections to something like: Early life and education, WASP/career, Later life, honors and awards.TylerMcmillan (talk) 19:07, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

I am trying this 'Biography' with subheadings approach which as been done on some similar articles with short sections. The 'Military career' section still needs expansion and the subheadings should probably be renamed, but I'm just seeing how it works for now. CAndrews94 (talk) 15:59, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
I like how your article is coming along. There is fascinating information. I never would have imagined that anyone who started off so afraid of flying that they had to turn the plane around would end up as a pilot. PattyLowery (talk) 22:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

I like the formatting of the article. It felt like a sweet love story at the end seeing how she sent him letters while he was in the hospital. Walkera143 (talk) 4:43, 25 July 2021 (UTC)