Talk:Marius Brülhart

The draft will be duly revised and updated
Dear Greenman,

Thank you for your comments, as well as those from other reviewers, regarding this draft. I will work on finding reliable sources to link to. The draft was based on the professor's CV, which is why it does not meet Wikipedia's standards. I will do my best to improve the draft as soon as possible.

Kind regards,

KMerrigold KMerrigold (talk) 08:57, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

The article is revised and the "Career" section is updated
Dear Greenman and dear ARandomName123 ,

Thanks again for your guidance. I have just updated the section "Career" of the Draft:Marius Brülhart addressing the concerns and questions you raised. I have made every effort to locate and utilize secondary and reliable sources to verify and substantiate the information from the professor's CV.

I would greatly appreciate any further suggestions you might have, and if everything is fine, for your approval of the draft.

Thank you.

Best regards,

KMerrigold KMerrigold (talk) 14:54, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments left by AfC reviewers



 * Dear DoubleGrazing,
 * Thank you very much. I have edited the punctuation accordingly as per your recommendation.
 * Best regards,
 * KMerrigold KMerrigold (talk) 16:14, 4 July 2024 (UTC)