Talk:Marja Samsom

Lead
The lead contains this sentence: "She was a part of early conceptual art in the Netherlands and has been featured in The Clocktower, Franklin Furnace, the New York Times and Vogue". That should be taken apart. "Featured" has two different meanings: written about and exhibited, that are not at all the same. That Vogue and the New York times write about her is not in itself noteworthy, and they certainly not the most important aspects of her biography that should be included in the lead; they're merely sources. They can be cited, of course, but only to support a factual statement, such as that she owned a particular restaurant. Vexations (talk) 16:59, 28 November 2021 (UTC)