Talk:Mark Henry/GA1

GA Review
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This is a very nice article, especially after adding in the weightlifting section. I do have a few things to fix though:
 * "and a year later, he became a North America, Central America, Caribbean Islands champion." Did he hold three titles or is that a long name for one? Needs to be clarified.
 * From what I can tell, it's just the one championship. I've attempted to clarify it. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 22:08, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
 * "his first feud in the WWF was with Jerry Lawler who had some harsh words for Henry on an episode of Monday Night Raw in March." I'd go into a bit more detail on what you mean here - what did Lawler say?
 * When me and Nici were working on the article, that was stated in the article. I looked at some sources, but they don't really say anything regarding Lawler having "harsh" words for Henry. But, this does mention he began a feud with Lawler. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  16:25, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Where'd be go between Sept 1996 and 1998?

I'll place the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 20:17, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Since the concerns are addressed, I'll pass the article. Wizardman  03:49, 20 August 2009 (UTC)