Talk:Mark Hudson (footballer, born 1982)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:34, 11 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll get to this by tonight. Courcelles (talk) 19:34, 11 May 2018 (UTC)


 * well, 24 hours late, but here we go.


 * "When I came back I wasn't offered a YTS" What's a YTS?
 * I shouldn't be on his fourth team and still not know what position he plays.
 * "and, [29] after" Get rid of the space between the comma and the ref.
 * Wikilink hernia
 * "set up the winning goal goal for" Duplicate word
 * team–mate" teammate is one word, or a hyphenated one.  Lose the endash though.
 * " fifth yellow card after picking up a fifth booking Reword, both to avoid using fifth twice, and to avoid making it sound like he got five yellow cards in one match.
 * " In March, Hudson was forced to undergo ankle surgery in March"... too in Marches?
 * " late–September" Hyphen, not dash.
 * "UEFA A Licence" "UEFA B licence"  Either licence is capitalised or it isn't.


 * All else looks well. Courcelles (talk) 22:15, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for another review, I've amended all of the issues above. Kosack (talk) 09:38, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 16:26, 13 May 2018 (UTC)