Talk:Mark Oliphant/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gilderien (talk · contribs) 11:34, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Initial thoughts
-- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds 22:01, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Why is "The two men got along very well, dining at Trader Vic's in Oakland" releveant? Was it a regular or frequent occurence? Please clarify.
 * It establishes the personal relationship between the two, which becomes important later on. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:50, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
 * " Lady Elizabeth Cockcroft who had died the year before" - the way this is written, it implies that they may have been more children, which there were not.
 * I don't follow this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:50, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Omitting the comma from " alongside Timothy Cockcroft, the infant son of Sir John and Lady Elizabeth Cockcroft, who had died the year before." implies that there were more children than the one who died.-- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds 18:25, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I added the comma; is it okay now? Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:32, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Yep, all good. -- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds  19:53, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
 * "the klyston capable of generating 400W" - do you mean klystron?
 * Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:39, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
 * " large-scale railgun which was used as a scientific instrument.experiments with plasma physics" - do you mean "instrument in experiments" or has some text been accidentally deleted?
 * Yes. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:39, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

No copyvio found. GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality: Yes -
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:

-- Gilderien Chat&#124;List of good deeds 20:12, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail: