Talk:Marry You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:42, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:


 * Lead
 * a song by -> a song recorded by
 * from his -> for his
 * the song is the album's -> the track serves as the record's
 * song, with -> song featuring
 * The song focuses -> The recording focuses
 * marriage, and -> marriage and
 * critiqued -> criticized
 * has sold 2.2 million copies so far. -> and has since sold 2.2 million copies there
 * becoming a top 5 song in New Zealand -> the top five in New Zealand
 * Glee. Their -> Glee; their
 * out peaked -> outperformed


 * Composition
 * wedding bells, -> remove comma
 * and features a -> and a
 * and he has been described to "woo" throughout it. -> Try to use different grammar.
 * and being -> with it being
 * "bubbly", and -> bubbly" and a
 * Lyrically, the love song -> A love song, it lyrically
 * impulses", and -> remove comma
 * song to the 60's -> song to 60's
 * girl-groups -> girl groups
 * groups, the -> groups and to the


 * Critical reception
 * stars, and labeled -> stars, with him labeling
 * that its sound -> that the recording's sound
 * production to be -> remove "to be"
 * Combine the two paragraphs
 * of Allmusic, praised -> Remove comma
 * found the -> founding the
 * thought that the song -> confessed that the recording
 * noted a lack of -> noted its lack of
 * where "fuck" -> where the word "fuck"


 * Chart performance
 * Try to differ grammar (song, song...)
 * copies and has -> copies there and has
 * US. It debuted -> United States, thus debuting


 * Live performance and covers
 * on the singles chart of Australia -> in Australia


 * Credits and personnel
 * On "Talking to the Moon", I have changed the style a minor bit. It would look better if you would implement it also here; however, you don't have to
 * I like it better, the way you did it on Talking to The Moon artcile. I have seen quite a couple of this around and that is the one that strikes me the most. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)

Oops, my bad. Once in a lifetime. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Charts
 * Make sure the charts are listed in alphabetical order (Germany...)


 * Certifications
 * For United States set a None at "certification


 * Release
 * Unlink labels and CD single both in "Process" and "History"

. Every issue you raised has been addressed, as always give it a second look. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Outcome: This article features mostly minor issues, thus I'm giving you 7 days to fix them by placing it on hold. Ping me when you're ready. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:34, 28 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Outcome: Passing this article! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:52, 28 May 2016 (UTC)