Talk:Marta (Ricardo Arjona song)/GA1

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 22:31, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

Will do it.  TheSpecialUser TSU 22:31, 23 August 2012 (UTC)


 * stage name Los Gringos - Can a comma be added after name?
 * Why not.


 * On the beginning of March 2011 -> In the beginning of March 2011
 * Done.


 * Please unlink actress per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done.


 * what i had to do was heavy - Make W in what and i capitalized.
 * The W is not needed to be capitalized, is the quotation is inside a sentence. Fixed i to I.


 * After thay had sex, the man leave some bills on the table and leaves - leave leaves. its sort of sounding awkward. Either change leave or leaves
 * Fixed.


 * Then, Gonzalez is shown drinking before - drinking what?
 * Wine, added.


 * Please use Track listing
 * The use of that template is discouraged for single-song issues. So, it's not needed.


 * Link iTunes in "Music video"
 * Done.


 * If possible, add WP:ALT for images and especially for the cover art
 * May eventually do it but not now hehe. Give me some time and it's done.


 * Arjona wanted to drastically change his musical style - "drastically" is kind of POV unless you use "" so either remove it or use a different word
 * All that is supported by the source, although i paraphrased it to avoid copyvio.


 * sounds like a capella performances - what is capella performances? either link it or add what it is in or add it using ;
 * What a capella is is quite obvious. Although, i linked it.


 * Arjona said about the album -> Arjona talking about the album, stated that,
 * Done.


 * The album is similar in style to Arjona's work on Galería Caribe (2000). - this shouldn't be the end of the para but instead it should be in the middle or in the start so please move it.
 * I didn't found a better place to write it but at the end as a closing statement. Could you suggest a better placement?

 TheSpecialUser TSU 07:32, 24 August 2012 (UTC)