Talk:Martha Annie Whiteley

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Peer Review
Hey girl!

So your lead section seems a little short. Maybe add in what types of chemistry she was involved in, like my girl was in entomology, fish osteology, and plant pathology. Just to give them an overall of what type of scientist she was.

What does BCs mean? In chemistry

It seems a little odd that you are referencing the actual articles in the wiki article. It just doesn't flow, and I don't think they normally do this (but I am not sure). I think they say a statement and then cite it, but I don't think they say "according to an article written by so and so..."

Other than that you seemed to have good info! --Belle2018 (talk) 22:30, 10 February 2018 (UTC)