Talk:Martine Chardtrand

CrazyGPLady's Peer Review
It was very well written and organized, to the point, no visible fluff. Could use some more information about filmography such as income for those films, her role in each film, and possibly links to more information about th4e films themselves if that is available. Information such as “Additionally, Chartrand is in high demand as a lecturer for conferences, master classes, and art workshops worldwide. She guides artists and shares the techniques and craft involved in creating paint-on-glass animation.” could be put in a more appropriate place instead of film career. Possibly into early years, or even create another category like Interesting Facts, or Personal Accomplishments. It does not fit very well into the Film category.

Ready! “Chartrand is the subject of the documentary Finding Macpherson (2014) directed by Serge Giguère which follows her 8 year journey to create her short film MacPherson (2012)” - This sentence should be moved from the Early Years section to another, perhaps as part of the Film Career section where you discuss MacPherson. “The artistry of paint-on-glass animation…” - Consider rephrasing this sentence, saying something along the lines of “Pain-on-glass animation style consists of…” etc. You article is well written and informative while keeping with the Wikipedia style. I have made comments above about a couple of sentences in particular that could be reworded or moved to different sections for better clarity. Otherwise, the article is in good shape and ready to be posted!

Batcow39 (talk) 16:39, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer review
Well done! Overall, it was informative and well organized. I got a good picture of who the filmmaker was and what their work looked like. The information was presented neutrally and without bias, as the references were reliable and independent. The chronological order and the well-placed sections made it easy to follow.

The only thing I would add is to make sure that everything was appropriately referenced! I noticed that there was no reference for the artistic style section. Wt12345 (talk) 22:19, 25 February 2018 (UTC)