Talk:Marvel Swimsuit Special/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 03:28, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

Starting review Kingsif (talk) 03:28, 27 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, just wanted to inquire about the status of this review. Do you know when you'll be able to continue? Morgan695 (talk) 16:12, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * When I remember I didn't finish it - I had it on a watch so it wouldn't have been much longer, but thanks for the ping! Pasted review below, sorry for the wait! Kingsif (talk) 16:33, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, edits have been made. Morgan695 (talk) 19:24, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Style

 * Lead could be a little longer, based on the overall length of the article
 * Development section written well - fluid and nice
 * Need a ref for "parody advertisements and fake interviews" sentence - I checked sources so I imagine it's in one of the nearby refs, but for ease, this warrants one at the end.
 * Not sure the Marvel Swimsuit Special #1 description should be presented as an 'e.g.' Perhaps replace as "One was the Marvel Swimsuit Special #1, which is set..." - or similar.
 * Coming off this, see coverage comment
 * Reception section good
 * Revivals section good
 * Needs attention one little thing

Coverage

 * Lead gives good coverage
 * Good coverage of development
 * May need some more coverage in Content, specifically having descriptions of the other comics as well as Marvel Swimsuit Special #1.
 * Good coverage of reception; perhaps a bit light on critics (only 4, though the series was prolific) but seems representative enough
 * Seems to use all available info about revivals
 * Needs attention one little thing

Illustration

 * Good use of table
 * Good idea to illustrate gender equality; good selection of appropriate images for it
 * Pass

Verifiability

 * Sources look good
 * Slight concern over Comicbook.com, but it seems reliable for what it is being used to source
 * Pass

Stability

 * History squeaky clean
 * Pass

Neutrality

 * Looks clear
 * Pass

Copyright

 * Check looks clean
 * All images fair use, with solid reasoning for each
 * Pass

Overall
on hold - see notes. Very close, just a few little things. Kingsif (talk) 16:33, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Symbol support vote.svg Nice work! Kingsif (talk) 21:03, 3 November 2019 (UTC)