Talk:Marvin Harrison Jr./GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * The lead should be expanded to include his high school career.
 * I expanded it but it was reverted due to perceived bloat, I'm going to leave it as is, rather than start an edit conflict.
 * And I reverted the change. MOS:LEAD is pretty clear that the the lead should summarize the entire article. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 16:52, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
 * @Gonzo fan2007 Is there anything else that needs be fixed? Newtothisedit (talk) 17:49, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
 * , nope, I'll pass it shortly. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 20:56, 16 May 2023 (UTC)

Early life and high school career

 * Coming out of high school Harrison was a four star prospect ranked the nations 14th best receiver recruit., add "as" after "ranked"
 * Done
 * as well as the schools atmosphere, "schools" should be "school's"
 * Done

College career

 * In the Buckeyes season opener against Notre Dame, "Buckeyes" should be "Buckeyes'"
 * Done
 * In his first game as the teams #1 receiver Harrison caught, add comma after "receiver"
 * Done
 * The following week he had his second consecutive 100-yard game with 102 yards on 6 catches and two touchdowns in a blowout win over Toledo., should reference 29 be attributed to this sentence?
 * Done

Images

 * Both images look good, freely licensed.