Talk:Marvin Williams (footballer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Will read this article and shall provide my feedback soon. MWright96 (talk) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "A spell at Swedish Third Division club Östersunds FK followed in April 2010, playing seven times before leaving the club in June that year." - team to avoid close reptition of the same word
 * "and subsequently signed for another Conference South team in the form of Sutton United in October 2012." - better; for fellow Conference South team Sutton United in October 2012.

Millwall

 * "Williams signed his first professional contract with the club, signing the contract just hours before Millwall's FA Cup tie against Premier League club Everton. - Williams signed his first professional contract with Millwall, just hours before the club's FA Cup tie against Premier League club Everton.
 * "Williams' goal came in injury-time, a goal which was" - one

Yevoil Club

 * "Ahead of the 2007–08 season, on 26 July 2007, Williams signed for Yeovil Town of League One for an undisclosed fee, signing a two-year contract with the club." - Williams signed a two-year contact for Yevoil Town of League One for an undisclosed fee.

Brentford

 * "Williams was placed on the transfer-list by Brentford manager Andy Scott. Scott stated that" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
 * " Williams was placed on the transfer-list by Brentford manager Andy Scott." - also; Williams was transfer listed by Brentford Manager Andy Scott

Return to England

 * "He became an regular member of Salisbury's playing squad adding another goal" - add a comma between "squad" and "adding"
 * "in a 2-2 draw" - the hyphen needs to be replaced by an en dash

Style of play

 * "When Williams signed for Brentford in 2008, manager Andy Scott described Williams as a" - him and remove "a"