Talk:Marwari horse/GA1

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Okay, let's get this party started....Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:10, 31 August 2009 (UTC)


 *  The breed deteriorated in the 1930s, but today has regained some of its popularity. - sorta leaves me hanging, deteriorated how?
 * Expounded on this in both the lead and body.


 *  In the 1990’s a breed society was formed for the Marwari in India, --> precise date if known is better.
 * 1995 - added by another user.


 *  ...depending on the geographic origin of the horse. Horses that receive a nutritious diet from the time they are foals tend to be taller and larger in general. - does look a little odd, as the first sentence mentions geography, then the next nutrition.
 * Tweaked this to make it (hopefully) flow better. Let me know if it worked!


 *  They are quite similar to the Kathiawari horse, another breed from India - might be good to mention how they are similar and different.
 * Expanded on this in body. Would you like more?
 * Yeah, that's okay, you could clarify what the facial differences are but not a deal-breaker.


 *  The Arabians possibly came ashore from a cargo ship wrecked off India's west coast.  - now that sounds like a cool story...any more info?
 * I haven't been able to find much else on this, but will do a bit more digging.
 * Update - found a bit more on this, although it's mostly legend. I added it in, is it enough?
 * Yes :)

Overall, pretty good, a few tweaks and we're there. Casliber (talk · contribs) 11:34, 31 August 2009 (UTC)
 * My replies are interspersed above. I will probably have a better reply on the last point this evening, after I have had a chance to look a bit more. Dana boomer (talk) 14:27, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed everything above. Please let me know if there are still issues you would like me to take care of! Dana boomer (talk) 15:30, 1 September 2009 (UTC)