Talk:Mary E. Clarke/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 16:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

can attend to shortly. Eddie891 Talk Work 16:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed Eddie891 Talk Work 13:50, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Cited to reliable sources Eddie891 Talk Work 13:51, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "the longest for a woman in the United States Army" The longest ever or at the time?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:36, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * consider removing cites in the lede
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:36, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Women in the Services Defense Advisory Committee." is not mentioned in the article?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:56, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "She was given the nickname of Betty" when?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:56, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "There she was involved with the Berlin Airlift crisis" in what capacity was she 'involved'?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:26, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * What would "WAC consulting" entail?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:26, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "She had special training at the United States Military Academy Preparatory School in 1976 to have women qualify to attend military academies, since it was then allowed for women" I don't really get what's trying to be said here, could you take a stab at clarifying?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:45, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * More to come Eddie891 Talk Work 14:01, 6 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Cite #6 is a book and needs page numbers. Is there anything further to add from it? It seems to cover the WAC in great detail
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:12, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Spotcheck
 * "Clarke was born on December 3, 1924, in Rochester, New York" source technically doesn't say where she was born, just that she grew up in Rochester
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:37, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Similarly, while "...as a child ...as a teenager" can probably be assumed, the ages she was at specific schools are not specified
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:37, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "August 10, 1945," source only specifies August
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:48, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


 * other checks come up clean.
 * holding Eddie891 Talk Work 01:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for review. I'll start on the issues. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:48, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:12, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
 * User:Eddie891 All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 17:01, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes, I saw your first ping. Waiting only a day and pinging again doesn't make me more inclined to take another look. Probably get to it tonight or tomorrow. Eddie891 Talk Work 17:03, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , Looks better now. The 'Award and decorations' and 'promotions' sections seem in need of some cites Eddie891 Talk Work 00:57, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Added extra cites for these sections. Will that work. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)