Talk:Mary Jo Kilroy

2006 campaign issues
A couple of things: -MrFizyx 07:14, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
 * The "Issues" section that someone has added needs sources, else it should be removed.
 * If we are going to have an issues section, I think it is worthy of note that unlike her opponent, Kilroy did not complete her NPAT for Project Vote Smart.
 * FactCheck has an article debunking a GOP add concerning Kilroy's position on taxes. Might be worth incorporating into the article.

GAC renom
Following the delisting above, I have renominated her bio with all the articles mentioning her in The New York Times, Newsweek, U.S. News & World Report and Time Magazine since her election.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:10, 1 July 2010 (UTC)

Lede and general tone
I'll leave it as is, but here are my thoughts: I don't think it's appropriate to have half the lede of a sitting U.S. Representative consist of her campaign/election history, as imo it trivializes the actual job. Since she hasn't been in office long, a summary of her previous work experience is appropriate. A summary of what she's accomplished might also be appropriate. Some include a geographical description of the District. Anyone interested in campaign history can simply scroll down. It's simply a matter of weight and emphasis: what's really important about someone who's a sitting U.S. Representative. Flatterworld (talk) 15:40, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

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