Talk:Mary Richmond

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:40, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Quick Praise and a few suggestions
Hello! I would first like to start off by saying that your page over Mary Richmond is great! It is nice to see people including more mid-western women on Wikipedia as their presence is a little lacking. If I could make a few suggestions though. First, in the life section of the article, there are a few sentences that are worded a little strangely that make the flow of the paragraph a little choppy. Second, the last paragraph of the contributions section seems to be a book reference and should probably go into the reference section. Otherwise, this a good start to an article! Sean Dwyer (talk) 13:37, 4 September 2016 (UTC)