Talk:Maryam Nawaz Sharif

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Articles must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts or show that it meets the notability guidelines for people. It is now wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references. As a matter of policy, all biographies of living people will be deleted if they do not have references. You seem confused who you are writing about. the first sentence tells us who her father and grandfather were, and why they are notable, nothing about her. Later on, we are told about Mian's enterprises, but notability is not transferable. It doesn't matter who her relatives are, she must be notable in her own right.

It was written in a unrelentingly promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, but this was written as if she was a goddess, not a woman. Buckets of syrupy stuff. I was going to give selected examples, but the paragraph that follows actually had nothing in it that wasn't hagiography. It's much the same throughout the article. ''Maryam Nawaz Sharif is a woman of values and integrity. She has a profound understanding of both national and international politics, a keen interest in the development of her beloved country and an equally sympathetic heart for her fellow countrymen. Her most admirable virtues include humility, being extremely humane and full of compassion. Her kind-heartedness is complemented by her elegant and refined personality. Maryam is a woman of wisdom and intelligence. A person who is relatively young but very mature in thought is the need of the day for a country like Pakistan. Being a high-spirited and extremely energetic individual, these traits will allow her to work solemnly for the people of Pakistan and to pave a road for development of the country. Maryam’s entry into politics is a sign of optimism. Her astute understanding of the present challenges faced by our country and her eagerness to work for their correction and to bring about prominent changes and developments has brought hope for many people. Her presence in politics has filled a void in the present political scenario of Pakistan.''

If you think you can demolish the shrine and write a proper article, also note that there should be any links to external sites in the text, just wikilinks. url links should be in the references or as an external links section  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  07:43, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

I have never seen such a biased article. My God, just destroy the personality part. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 115.186.48.215 (talk) 11:07, 15 March 2012 (UTC)

Agreed with the biased part. It seems that PML N has funded this Wikipedia contributor — Preceding unsigned comment added by 182.173.72.254 (talk) 14:21, 27 March 2012 (UTC)