Talk:Maryana Marrash/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 08:32, 24 September 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Very nice as usual, here are my comments:
 * "She also seems to have been the first woman to write in the Arab daily newspapers." - remove also, replace "seems to" with eg "may" as too weasily
 * "Other Melkite Catholics were exiled from Aleppo during the persecutions, and among them the priest Jibrail Marrash.[4][a]" - redundant
 * "sectarian" could be linked
 * Ok, that is all...--Kürbis (✔) 15:55, 8 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for everything, Kürbis! Bryan P. C. C. (talk) 21:40, 8 October 2012 (UTC)