Talk:Marysville, Washington/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 07:09, 27 February 2017 (UTC)

Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:09, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
 * "Marysville is a city in Snohomish County, Washington, United States. It is the second-largest city in the county after Everett, with a population of 60,020 in the 2010 U.S. census." could these two sentences be combined? YE Pacific Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'd prefer to leave them separate, given that the first is a self-contained statement and the second leads into the rest of the paragraph. Should I merge the first sentence with some of the location information instead?
 * Yes. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:40, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Done.
 * "What is a third/fourth class city? YE Pacific Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Added a link to the definition, but it's the classification system for cities used by the state government that determines governance and organization.
 * "The NASCAR site was later pitched as a candidate for a new University of Washington satellite campus (known as UW North Sound) in the late 2000s,[36] competing with downtown Everett,[37] before the project was put on hold in 2008 and cancelled in 2011.[38][39]" why was it put on hold and cancelled? YE Pacific Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Added some clarification.
 * Anything regarding climate? YE Pacific Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ❌ Marysville does not have climate data of its own and would need to rely on data from Arlington's airport or Everett, which both vary slightly from the city.
 * Why are population changes pre-1950 mentioned in the history and ones post-1950 mentioned in the demographic section? YE Pacific Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I felt it was more appropriate to have historic population growth in the history section, and modern-day growth in the demographics section, which is still subject to change. Should I do some shuffling/mixing of the two?
 * Avoid WP:OVERLINK in the demographics section please. YE Pacific Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Done.
 * "Marysville ranks eighth among Washington cities for commute times, with an average commute of approximately 30 minutes.[70][144]" eighth highest or eighth lowest? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  06:08, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Clarified it as eighth-longest.


 * Thanks for the review. I think I've answered the points you've raised.  Sounder Bruce  06:33, 15 March 2017 (UTC)