Talk:Massive Attack (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tb hotch Ta lk C.  20:54, 7 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Infobox
 * (see release history) -> Is really needed? I believe so, as there are multiple release dates.
 * a "-" on Garret chronology

, was the work of another editor.
 * Lead
 * References in the lead are not needed.


 * Background
 * on ref 2 Georgette Cline made the work
 * In an interview on the set of the video shoot for "Massive Attack", -> Source does not state it Taken from MTV article "Nikki Minaj on the set of her video for "Massive Attack".."I brought my BFF Amber Rose out here," Nicki said while sitting in her ride. "This is a massive attack. We shot the helicopter scene."
 * flop of the song and he stated -> he said
 * I think "Massive Attack" may have -> I think 'Massive Attack' may have


 * Music and lyrics
 * The section should be merged because it is very small What section do you suggest merging to?
 * It would be nice having the composition of the song Information is not readily available, another editor put in a request at musicnotes.com for them to host the sheet music.
 * Simba and Mufasa can be wikilinked
 * Per Manual of Style (music samples) File:Massiveattack.ogg must be at most 21 seconds


 * Music video
 * File:Massiveattackvideo.jpg need to be 300px x 300px
 * 106 & Park on -> It was mentioned on the background, so it should be wikilinked there and not here. Linked it above, but kept the second as I was told in a previous review in a detailed article that same links can be used in different sections.
 * As the song begins we see Minaj in a -> "we"? This does not sounds encyclopedic.

She is leading an army of Harajuku Girls in the video, she's not just commanding a troop of regular Harajuku Girls, and I'm not sure if Minaj stated it as such, either her of the media.
 * on the car. [14] -> unnecessary space.
 * Charts
 * Reference 15 does not state it. Billboard.biz is the only site that can be used to access the chart, and it is behind a login.
 * Reference 16 does not state it. Billboard keeps glitching, I don't know what I can do about that. The song isn't in Minaj's chart history, at the time of nomination it appeared in Mariah Carey's current charting songs, and now idk.
 * Reference 16 need itallics in Billboard


 * General
 * 1 dab link


 * References
 * on ref 2, 6, 7, 12 and 14 is the publisher.

I've reviewed it, many problems, I put the article on hold until July 15. Tb hotch Ta lk C. 20:54, 7 July 2010 (UTC)

Ok all were done and resolved, excepting the "Bubbling" thing, as far as I know .biz is not considerate a reliable source, but either way, it was published in the magazine, so it has non-sense. I have to 'pass this article. Tb hotch Ta lk C. 01:53, 10 July 2010 (UTC)